依靠自己英語四級作文及點評

　　當你走出家門開始新的征程，首先要學(xué)會的就是要依靠自己，學(xué)會獨立。沒有人可以永遠在別人的呵護下成長，獨立生活是我們走向成熟的必經(jīng)之路。

　　Depend on Yourself

　　Depend on yourself is what nature says to every man. Parents can help you. Teachers can help you. Others still can help you. But all these people only help you to help yourself.

　　There have been many great men in history. Many of them were very poor in childhood, and had no uncles, aunts or friends to help them. Schools were few and not very good. They could not depend on them for education. They saw how it was, and set to work with their strength to know something.① They worked their own way till they became well-known.② One of the most famous teachers in England used to tell his pupils, I cannot make worthy men of you, but I can help you make men of yourselves.

　　Some young men dont try their best to make themselves valuable to human beings. They can not gain achievements unless they see their weakness and change their course. They are nothing now, and will be nothing as long as they live, unless they accept the advice of their parents and teachers, and depend on their own efforts.

　　行文點評

　　我們應(yīng)該依靠自己，他人只能幫助我們幫助自己。這是文章的主旨，也是第一段中的主要意思。第二段開始從正面舉例說明歷史上的`偉大人物是怎樣依靠自己的力量獲得最后成功的。最后一段從反面舉例，談到現(xiàn)在有些年輕人不努力使自己成為對人類有益的人，并給出自己的建議，與題目和文章開頭呼應(yīng)。

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