英語四級作文范文

2015年6月英語四級作文外教版范文和評析(滬江網(wǎng)校版)Part I Writing

Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, it’s convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience.

Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating.

For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing.

點(diǎn)評：

作者在第一段描述了網(wǎng)購作為一種時尚給大家的.生活帶來了便利，然后話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，說網(wǎng)購仍然取代不了面對面的購物交流。

第二段主要還是從正反兩方面分析了網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)勢和不足，以此描述大家對網(wǎng)購的不同反應(yīng)。

第三段作者表明了自己的觀點(diǎn)，對網(wǎng)購的便利和不足之處都做了描述。

綜合來講，本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言表達(dá)地道，有不少閃光詞匯，但是，內(nèi)容深度上來講還有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表達(dá)個人觀點(diǎn)，和第二段稍有重復(fù)�？忌�需要注意觀點(diǎn)的清晰，不宜模棱兩可。

2004年6月19日大學(xué)英語四級作文題目

A brief introduction to a tourist attraction

2004年6月19日大學(xué)英語四級作文范文

Welcome everyone, I am glad that you can come to Pingyao County, where there is the oldest Confucius temple. It was opened to the public Monday after a one-year renovation project.

I hope you can appreciate the spot indeed.

First, I will show the main building of the temple, its the most interesting spot here.

Second, we can walk around to see the other area of the spot. Finally, I will tell the history of the temple.

The main building of the temple was built in 1163, in the Yuan Dynasty , and has a history of more than 840 years.

Compared with other famous Confucius temples nationwide, it was built 248 years earlier than that in Beijing, and 317 years earlier than that in Qufu City, Confucius's home in east China's Shandong Province. The temple in Qufu was added to the list of the World Cultural Heritages in 1995. The Pingyao Confucius Temple has China's largest statue collection of Confucius and famous ancient Confucian scholars. Covering a total area of 40,000 square meters, the temple has 112 buildings in 16 categories. that is the history of the temple.

Please visit as you like. If you have any questions, you can ask me. That's all.

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